Week 2 Discussion
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Week 2 Discussion Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed writing it and think that the wikispaces reflection was such a grea…
Week 2 Discussion Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed writing it and think that the wikispaces reflection was such a great learning tool for the course, i wish all my assessment tasks were like this :)
JAC feedback :-)
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JAC feedback :-) Lots of wonderful pictures and images and creativity in this wiki diary! Lovely to see such creativ…
JAC feedback :-) Lots of wonderful pictures and images and creativity in this wiki diary! Lovely to see such creativity! It was really interesting to hear your own personal insights and experiences and opinions on the many social determinants of women's health. This is a lovely creation - and I can see you engaged with the unit content and had a rich and strong learning process throughout the semester. It needed an edit in some parts - but overall, well done!
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JAC Feedback :-) Oh wow, this wiki is really cool! It was so entertaining to read, and gave so much personal insight…
JAC Feedback :-) Oh wow, this wiki is really cool! It was so entertaining to read, and gave so much personal insight into your learning process and progress. Your writing style was really accessible, and you wrote well throughout. You included some fun, relevant, and powerful examples from popular culture and the media - it good to see you recognising these as feminist issues and as women's health issues wherever they occur. Amazing work!
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JAC Feedback :-) These are great entries, and I can see in each one how deeply you have engaged with the lecture con…
JAC Feedback :-) These are great entries, and I can see in each one how deeply you have engaged with the lecture content! I enjoyed seeing the different examples you included from websites, media, and popular culture... it really makes you realise how ubiquitous these issues are! We see them absolutely everywhere, and there is still so much hard work to be done to change how our wonderful gender is viewed and treated. I hope you carry this framework for thinking throughout your life, and that it is useful to you in confronting the many challenging issues women face.Well done!
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JAC Feedback :-) I found your wiki incredibly creative and I especially liked liked the titles you gave each weekly …
JAC Feedback :-) I found your wiki incredibly creative and I especially liked liked the titles you gave each weekly reflection entry - very entertaining and radical! The written entries demonstrate a deep understanding of the empirical and theoretical components of this unit, and your application to examples in society and the media show sophisticated thinking and critical insight. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for being an awesome student this year! :-)
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JAC Feedback :-) This is extremely good work. You've managed a sophisticated blend of personal reflection, lecture c…
JAC Feedback :-) This is extremely good work. You've managed a sophisticated blend of personal reflection, lecture content, cultural artefacts, and academic research. It was just so informative, comprehensive and diverse and creative in its content! It sounds as though you engaged really seriously and in a really intelligent way with the unit. Well done!
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JAC feedback :-) WOW! What an absolutely top effort! I really enjoyed reading these entries. You put so much effort …
JAC feedback :-) WOW! What an absolutely top effort! I really enjoyed reading these entries. You put so much effort and work into each one, and did some insightful reflections on how the lecture and tutorial content related to examples both in your personal life and in popular culture and the media. You were so thorough and creative in your selection of artefacts, videos, images and resources. It looked terrific and very well presented - and I am thrilled that you enjoyed the unit. Keep fighting the good fight!
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JAC Feedback :-) This is wonderful work! I absolutely loved the layout, design, structure and composition of these R…
JAC Feedback :-) This is wonderful work! I absolutely loved the layout, design, structure and composition of these Reflective Diaries. Your writing style is highly competent and professional. Your content demonstrated a very comprehensive understanding of the lecture content and tutorial discussions. I loved the inclusion of a wide range of artefacts that sought to demonstrate and articulate the points you were making in your entries. I learnt quite a bit from reading your wiki! Super well done.
Being Ladylike
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Being Ladylike JAC feedback :-)
You've done a terrific job here, Louise. Just fantastic. You write well, and ma…
Being Ladylike JAC feedback :-)
You've done a terrific job here, Louise. Just fantastic. You write well, and make insightful comments and deep reflections all the way through your diary entries. It is very well-structured and the images and artefacts are really well selected, and help make your arguments beautifully. You seemed to have gotten a lot out of the unit, which means you've put a lot IN to the unit. Super well done.